What The Walking Dead taught me about writing

Dumb decisions brought Rick and the gang to this point.

Most of the second half of Season 6 of The Walking Dead didn't make sense.

Most of the characters we know and love acted like they'd lost their minds.

Okay, I've said it. 

And I'm not alone in thinking it. 

The Walking Dead made us feel like this.

The last few episodes leading up the Walking Dead season 6 finale had a lot of people screaming at their TV screens. The reason - the characters that viewers know (probably as well as most family members) and love started acting out of character.

Rick kills Primo thinking he's Negan. 

Take Rick Grimes. He goes after Negan's gang not even knowing who exactly they are, what Negan looks like and whether his group will be outnumbered and outgunned. 

Does that make any sense for such a shrewd leader? No way, Jose.

Then there's our beloved Daryl Dixon. With the big bogey man coming in the shape of comic villain Negan (did Rick Grimes really think the red shirt he killed so easily in a previous episode was dictator Negan - I doubt it), Daryl Dixon decided to go after Savior Dwight who killed Dr Denise with an arrow to the head. Daryl believed he'd caused her death by not killing Dwight when he had the chance. 

Daryl Dixon gets caught too easily. Like that should happen!

If Daryl Dixon had gone after his zombie apocalypse soulmate, Carol, that'd have made sense. But getting justice for Denise, I just don't see it.

Rick and Daryl weren't the only ones behaving out of character.

When a psycho is coming, you need Carol. 

Carol, the mother of the group, decides to leave Tobin a Dear John letter and quit Alexandria. Bully Negan's heading their way, but hey she can't kill for anyone any more. Even though she's pretty good at it.

Abraham doesn't tell Rick his plan to take out the saviors is dumb.

Soldier Abraham doesn't even suggest they do some fact-finding on Negan and his band of thieves before they kill some of his cohorts whilst they're sleeping. There's no due diligence like, "Hey, Rick shouldn't we check the guy you're about to kill genuinely is the Big, Bad Wolf?"

But, no the story isn't being dictated by Rick, Daryl, Carol and Abraham. What Rick and Co do is being dictated by the story. The writers are using them like pawns on a chessboard.

Annoying isn't it when characters are manipulated like that, and unsatisfying. 

And that's why so many fans like me are angry with The Walking Dead - we know these characters and how they'll react and its not how they've been acting on the show. 

Rick would find out everything he could about Negan before he went after him.

Daryl wouldn't go and get himself and a lot of his friends taken.

Carol would kill again - even if it was one last time.

Abraham would say to Rick, "We need to do this right."

Michonne getting caught? No way. 

No matter what you're writing, your characters have to act in a believable way. Rick, Daryl, Carol and Abraham haven't been doing that.

Their characters have been messed with to make the story go a certain way and that leaves viewers disappointed.

As a writer, you don't want your readers to feel the same way. They'd be perfectly entitled to throw your book across the room.

Characters must be consistent and if they change, there must be a very good reason for it.

Good storytelling has to make some sense, or your readers will be left disappointed. 

How Carol could die to save Daryl Dixon in The Walking Dead Season 6 finale

Could Carol and Daryl be about to say goodbye?

When Negan does first appear in Issue 100, he punishes Rick Grime's group for taking on The Saviors by choosing someone in the group to bash with his baseball bat, named Lucille. In the comics, Glenn gets his head bashed in.

Who'll meet their grisly end under Negan's bat?

But, wouldn't it make more sense if Negan targets Daryl instead? He did after all vaporise some of his best men and equipment with a rocket launcher after they made the mistake of telling Daryl, Abraham and Sasha, "Everything you own is Negan's now."

No wonder they ended up as puddles of blood. 

So, Negan targets Daryl. 

Carol has had enough in the walkerverse?

Step toward Carol. "He might have killed a few of your gang, but I killed a lot," she sneers. 

She'll tell how she trapped the newly arrived Saviors on the kill floor, which had been doused with gasoline and how she then threw her lit cigarette into the room and watched as their bodies went up in flames. 

Carol threw the match that burned the saviors alive. Will Negan take his revenge?

Way to out psycho a psycho Carol. 

Would it be any wonder if Negan decided to turn Lucille on one the most dangerous people in the walkerverse? 

What do you think? Who will end their days as a bloody pulp? 

If Carol does die she'll go out as the woman who singlehandedly saved them all from Terminus, in one of the best all-time episodes of The Walking Dead.

Negan's other victim?

Negan could choose to kill more than one person. The actor who plays Heath has landed the starring role in the 24 reboot, so it could be him.

Could Abraham be next to go? 

Abraham dodged an arrow death in the TV show and poor doctor Denise got it instead. Could his luck be about to run out? He seems to be the most likely candidate. 

Denise got the arrow that killed Abraham in the comics. 

Note - this is how I'd write it and not based on any inside information or spoilers I've read.